Individuality+by+Melody

Syllables are off. Sure. Deepest apologies. Criticism and comments are welcome. Flaming is not. //C//ompliments--preferably //pointless// compliments--are welcome, too.

And a note to you who said that males always have male characters, and females have females... Ha. Though. Didn't do a very accurate job...You could easily replace each "her" or "she" with "him" or "him".

Commas indicate pauses, lines indicate new lines, and stanzas...indicate a new set of lines... Suffer to my commentary...My opinions..Those things that people find difficult and unnecessary...But hey..They're my own notes to keep in mind..for future reference...Ask Alexia about what I write in my notebook as personal notes.. Oh, goodie...

Credits to SE. Myself. And a friend for inspiration and keeping me company while helping with one line's word choice.

Individuality by Melody

Entry was made, her resolve at height; Rage defined, and the moment shone bright. She would have it now, as the time was ripe. Now or never—so…what type?

This store rang quite clear, That egotism ruled here. Perfect notes played gracefully, Though heard upon so sinfully [HA, fail].

She frowned in disgust, Her intestines to combust [Magnificent. Fantastic--beautiful! Wonderful. Brilliant. Great. Awesome. Tch, it doesn't end.] Phenomenal. Spectacular. Extravagant. Amazing ;) ~A Gregarious here, gregarious there. These trends were everywhere.

Weary and tired, she left the store; agitation at hand, As the salesman continued to extol their top brand, A disheartened glow stood very near, When she entered yet another store, in fear.

But here, appeasing scenery shook the air, As individuality answered prayer. Painted along walls, radiant character had might. Her hopes not lost, as eyes now took flight.

She sought for that would defy the indifferent One that would scream, “I’m different!” She as a person, wanted to be seen, As the music she was—distinct and serene.

The black and sleek headband snugged on her head, Flawless calculations, with each note, perfectly led. These were it, without a doubt; And when she saw them—let out a [Taken out due to wonderful criticism by Mr. Dougall. Indeed, it doesn't sound quite right. Never meant it that way. Trip to a thesaurus.] shout.

They announced her character, beautiful to bear Her happiness brought but a single tear to wear [Beautiful. Cheesiest. Thing.]. They could not be surpassed, as she inspired. For they were what she had so longingly desired.