Dalia's+9.11+paragragh

My 9/11 paragraph:

 Since this Sunday is the tenth anniversary of September 11, 2001, I asked my mother where she was that day and when she found out about the attacks. She said," It was horribble. It was the most shocking thing that ever happened in my life." When I asked her what other feelings or thoughts she remembers from that day she replied," I had had just dropped of my daughter off at school and after wards I turned on the TV, and I was in shock, i felt very sad to what people had to face in New York. I felt angry and could not believe the horrible acts committed by these despicable people." After hearing my mother talk about September 11, 2001, I feel very sad because i would hate to loose somebody i know in a terrifying accident like 9/11. I also feel scared because, i don't want something like that to happen again; more people might die including me.

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